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The following discussion is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 10:22, 19 November 2013 (UTC)

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Cemento[edit]

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Created by Cambalachero (talk). Self nominated at 02:17, 22 October 2013 (UTC).

  • Katja Alemann: New enough, long enough, well sourced, no close paraphrasing. A slightly longer lead paragraph would be nice, as would some basic biographical details, date/place of birth etc, but I can appreciate this info might not be readily available.
  • Cemento: New enough, long enough, no close paraphrasing. There are only two sources, which is pretty much the bare minimum; one or two more would help to establish notability. However, there are regular footnotes, and I assume good faith that the two sources verify all the article's content. There's a bit of confusion between the two nightclubs in the third paragraph – which club was Nuca playing at, and which club was seized by the police? (I think the answer to both of these questions is "Cemento", but the article should make that clearer.) By the way, I'm just making general suggestions for improvement here. You don't have to address all these issues right now; both articles currently meet DYK requirements.
  • The hook fact is interesting, and is mentioned and verified in both articles. I'd be inclined to drop the image of the closed-up, vandalized nightclub, though; it's not all that interesting or informative. QPQ isn't complete – because you're nominating two articles, you have to complete two reviews. Once that's done, we'll be ready to go. DoctorKubla (talk) 09:27, 18 November 2013 (UTC)
  • Okay, good to go. I've removed the image. DoctorKubla (talk) 08:05, 19 November 2013 (UTC)
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