Template:Did you know nominations/Ann Hunt and Elizabeth Hamel
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The result was: promoted by Hawkeye7 (talk) 01:29, 17 May 2014 (UTC)
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Ann Hunt and Elizabeth Hamel[edit]
... that Ann Hunt and Elizabeth Hamel hold the Guinness World Record as the longest separated twins?
- Reviewed: St Joseph's Church, Preston
- Comment: I created the article on May 5, but I expanded the text 5 x starting May 10, so I'm using the latter date for the DYK.
Created/expanded by I am One of Many (talk). Self nominated at 06:52, 11 May 2014 (UTC).
This interesting article is a fivefold expansion and is long enough and new enough. The hook fact needs an inline citation at the end of the sentence (it is currently at the end of the paragraph). I suggest a more accurate hook would be:
- ALT1 ... that Ann Hunt and Elizabeth Hamel hold the Guinness World Record as the longest separated twins to be reunited? Cwmhiraeth (talk) 11:24, 15 May 2014 (UTC)
- Your suggested ALT1 is fine with me, so I struck the original.I am One of Many (talk) 14:42, 15 May 2014 (UTC)
Hook fact is now cited inline so ready to go with ALT1. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 10:49, 16 May 2014 (UTC)
