Talk:Wressle Castle/GA1
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Reviewer: Hchc2009 (talk · contribs) 07:52, 6 April 2016 (UTC)
I'll read through and start the review proper later on today. Hchc2009 (talk) 07:52, 6 April 2016 (UTC)
Well-written:
(a) the prose is clear and concise, respects copyright laws, and the spelling and grammar are correct;
- I'd usually advise giving inline attribution to quotes like 'Wressle Castle was built “as a residence reflecting [the Earl’s] pedigree and distinguished state service”' to make it clear that it is Emery's voice, rather someone cited in Emery.
- "Eric John Fisher suggested" - can we say who Fisher was? (e.g. "the historian Eric John Fisher"?)
- "whether this was a previous manorial centre, or whether it was an entirely new site." - may be worth tweaking this slightly; we both know that "previous" means "prior to Norman invasion", but the reader may not.
- "late 15th century" - should this be "late-15th century"? I can never remember.
- "was made private with a brick wall" - unclear if this means it was always private with a wall, or if it wasn't originally private and was later made so.
- Minor, but the rest of the article talks about ranges in the castle; this isn't picked up in the architecture section though; not necessarily inconsistent, but it read oddly to me
- I think it's 'late-15th century' - that one tends to fox me too. I've gone ahead and made those changes, and explained who Emery is since he's now mentioned in the text. Richard Nevell (talk) 23:14, 12 April 2016 (UTC)
(b) it complies with the manual of style guidelines for lead sections, layout, words to watch, fiction, and list incorporation.
- Could the lead describe the castle's architecture in outline?
- I've added a little in. Richard Nevell (talk) 23:14, 12 April 2016 (UTC)
Factually accurate and verifiable:
(a) it provides references to all sources of information in the section(s) dedicated to the attribution of these sources according to the guide to layout;
- Is Fisher 1954 or 1955? (you give both!)
- One use of Holye 2004b (spelling)
- fn 26 - Emery needs a "|" after it before the year
- "Ed Dennison Archaeological Services 2015, pp. 7–8" - the biblio gives the authors here as Richardson, Shaun and Dennison, Ed, rather than the Archaeological Services organisation (and the harvnb link won't work as a result!)
- Worth checking the Oxford Dictionary of National Biography dates; I think you're using the on-line editions, which were published in 2008 rather than 2004.
- v. minor, but there's an inconsistency in whether just the publisher is given, or publisher and location.
- I think I've got most of them. Not sure how I managed to confuse 1954 with 1995 for the Fisher reference though. Richard Nevell (talk) 18:13, 7 April 2016 (UTC)
(b) it provides in-line citations from reliable sources for direct quotations, statistics, published opinion, counter-intuitive or controversial statements that are challenged or likely to be challenged, and contentious material relating to living persons—science-based articles should follow the scientific citation guidelines;
(c) it contains no original research.
- None found.
Broad in its coverage:
(a) it addresses the main aspects of the topic;
(b) it stays focused on the topic without going into unnecessary detail (see summary style).
Neutral: it represents viewpoints fairly and without bias, giving due weight to each.
Stable: it does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute.
Illustrated, if possible, by images:
(a) images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content;
(b) images are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions.
- Thank you for taking time to review the article, your feedback was very useful. Richard Nevell (talk) 15:12, 17 April 2016 (UTC)