Talk:When I Grow Up (The Pussycat Dolls song)/GA1

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Reviewer: AJona1992 (talk · contribs) 02:39, 25 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

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Reality series
  • "the goal of the show was add a seventh member to the group." missing a word
  • Also this section has nothing to do with the song in any part, so its best to move it to the main page and remove it here.
  • It's in the background section for a reason. This all happened before they began recording their second album. Statυs (talk) 03:07, 28 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
  • Background information is to what put happened before the song's creation into context. Adding a new member, and then them leaving is directly relevant to one of the reasons they took so long to release a new album. Statυs (talk) 22:44, 10 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]
    • The section seems more suitable for the album, not the song. Best, Jonayo! Selena 4 ever 15:49, 12 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]
      • Can you remove this section to the main article so I can pass it? Best, Jonatalk to me 15:51, 26 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Music and lyrics
  • "Lead vocalist Nicole Scherzinger was cited as adopting" we already know she is the lead vocalist, so her last name is only needed here.
  • Delink The Yardbirds
Remixes
  • For unknown reasons, the remix was never released. source?
  • Why exactly does this need a source? The remix just wasn't released. Nothing was said about it since. Statυs (talk) 03:07, 28 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
  • Please fix the {{cn}} tags in this section
  • How would you suggest I source that statement? Could I just source the CD single/Digital releases that are present later in the article? Statυs (talk) 03:07, 28 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Commercial performance
  • at number seventy-six on the issue dated June 14, 2008 per WP:ORDINAL it would be 76, please apply elsewhere in this section.

Please fix these before I go further. BTW sorry for the long wait. Best, Jonayo! Selena 4 ever 02:54, 28 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

It's perfectly alright. Thank you for picking up the review! Statυs (talk) 03:10, 28 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Short break, lets begin[edit]

Music video
  • Delink Digital Spy
  • "Kimberly's signature move:" source?
 Done Statυs (talk) 00:05, 5 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Live performances
 Done Statυs (talk) 00:05, 5 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Formats and track listings
  • Digital single source?
  • Digital EP source?
 Done Statυs (talk) 00:07, 5 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]
References
  • FN#4 "Archived from %7C the original" needs fixing
I don't see what is making it do that. Statυs (talk) 00:05, 5 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]
  • FN#8 publisherid?
The publisher ID is different on different versions of the album. By that I mean, it won't be the same on the US version as it would be on the European version. It's best to leave it out. Statυs (talk) 00:18, 5 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]
 Done Statυs (talk) 00:05, 5 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]
  • FN#15 publisher?
 Done Statυs (talk) 00:15, 5 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]
  • FN#16 "Up for Discussion Jump to Forums." I never heard of this author before
 Done Statυs (talk) 00:05, 5 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]
  • FN#17 "MTV Networks]. " needs fixing
 Done Statυs (talk) 00:05, 5 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]
 Done Statυs (talk) 00:13, 5 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]
  • FN#25 publisher?
Doesn't appear to be one. Statυs (talk) 00:13, 5 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]
  • FN#70 " "Video: Pussycat Dolls Perform on ‘So You Think You Can Dance&#8217"." needs fixing, also please compare to FN#58
 Done Statυs (talk) 00:13, 5 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]
  • FN#71 compare with FN#58
 Done Statυs (talk) 00:13, 5 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]
  • FN#74 do not shout
 Done Statυs (talk) 00:13, 5 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Please fix these issues. Best, Jonayo! Selena 4 ever 23:07, 4 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you for fixing, now passing. Best, Jonatalk to me 12:07, 30 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]
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