Talk:Waldis Joaquín

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Review: September 21, 2021. (Reviewed version).

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GA Review[edit]

This review is transcluded from Talk:Waldis Joaquín/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 07:23, 17 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Comments

"appeared in a career-high 10 games. " you mean career-high for that one season?
"Claimed off waivers by ... the waiver claim" repetitive (and to me, a non-expert, completely indecipherable).
"the Washington Nationals organization" does "organization" add anything to this?
Similar in the following sentence.
- It's often used to make clear that he didn't pitch for the actual team, but that's already covered anyway, so I took it out. Sanfranciscogiants17 (talk) 18:27, 17 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]
"the disabled list" is that the injury list? Is there a link?
- Sorry, I forgot to link it! Its name was changed to injury list beginning in the 2019 season, so for future reference, it's the disabled list 2018 and earlier and the injured list 2019 and later. Sanfranciscogiants17 (talk) 18:24, 17 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]
"became a free agent. He" overlinked.
extended spring training is linked but spring training is not?
" a 1-0 record" en-dash.
"Caribes de Anzoategui " missing a diacritic.
"2017-18 offseason" en-dash.
"Bleacher Report" link.

That's all I have. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 14:58, 17 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

- The Rambling Man Made all changes. Is there anything else? Sanfranciscogiants17 (talk) 11:24, 21 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  - No, I just haven't done a sweep of my open GA reviews for a few days. Hopefully get to it later today. Cheers. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 11:34, 21 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]