Talk:Un Lujo

Un Lujo was nominated as a Music good article, but it did not meet the good article criteria at the time (October 13, 2013). There are suggestions on the review page for improving the article. If you can improve it, please do; it may then be renominated.

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GA Review[edit]

This review is transcluded from Talk:Un Lujo/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Вик Ретлхед (talk · contribs) 21:24, 11 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]

I'll review this one. Will start reading the article today, initial comments coming tomorrow.--Вик Ретлхед (talk) 21:24, 11 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Some questions first

Are there any professional reviews of the album, let's say AllMusic or some newspapers/magazines?
Can you compose a section about the musical style of the album?

Things to address

unlink the red words
remove Mexico from the info-box; find exact release date for the singles
remove "This track listing adapted from the album liner notes." and "standard"; put duration in that section
provide a list of personnel
Mariachi with small "m"
drop the first "released" from the opening line; split the sentence like this: "It was released on May 22, 2012 by Skalona Records"
re-write the following sentence like this: Sebastian wrote and produced all tracks on the record, four of which were performed by him. Lucero had a solo performance on four songs, while the remaining three were duets on which both artists were featured.
"Un Lujo debuted in the top five in the Billboard Top Latin Albums in the United States and within the top forty in Mexico."→write the exact chart positions
were both signed to the same record label (Musart Records) during the 80s,→omit "the same record label" and the brackets
replace "shooting" with filming
"Charts" instead of "Chart performance"

More comments to follow.--Вик Ретлхед (talk) 22:09, 11 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Conclusion: OK, after going through the entire article, I've decided to fail it. The prose is not GA level, and the text does not addresses the main aspects of the topic. Without professional reviews and a list of personnel I can not promote this to good article. After you've fulfiled these issues, feel free to nominate it again.--Вик Ретлхед (talk) 07:58, 13 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]