Talk:Typhoon Irving (1982)
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Reviewer: HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk · contribs) 19:52, 12 May 2020 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
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- It is broad in its coverage.
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- It is stable.
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- Overall: Pass
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Review[edit]
Lead[edit]
- Can tropical depression be Wikilinked?
Meteorological history[edit]
in early Septembe 1982.
Should say SeptemberBy early on September 4
, wordingHowever
(see WP:EDITORIALIZING)- Looking at the context, I don't see how this contrast is editorializing. "in part because the subtropical ridge was anticipated to remain anchored north of the system. However, this ridge proved to be weaker than expected and Irving tracked slowly northwestward instead." The source say the storm move in a certain direction but it moved in a different direction instead. That's an indisputable contrast. YE Pacific Hurricane
- . HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 00:26, 16 May 2020 (UTC)
- Looking at the context, I don't see how this contrast is editorializing. "in part because the subtropical ridge was anticipated to remain anchored north of the system. However, this ridge proved to be weaker than expected and Irving tracked slowly northwestward instead." The source say the storm move in a certain direction but it moved in a different direction instead. That's an indisputable contrast. YE Pacific Hurricane
A Hurricane hunter aircraft
. Please maintain consistency with capitalization. It was earlier spelt asafter a Hurricane Hunter aircraft
with a capital H.
Impact[edit]
Schools were closed
can this be merged with the previous sentence?Twenty-three were wounded.
Please spell as 23 and try to merge with following sentenceHowever
(see WP:EDITORIALIZING)
References[edit]
- Please add "via Lexis Nexis (subscription required)" to reference #11 if this is how you accessed it.
- Done. YE Pacific Hurricane 21:18, 15 May 2020 (UTC)
- Yellow Evan Passing. HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 01:14, 16 May 2020 (UTC)
- Done. YE Pacific Hurricane 21:18, 15 May 2020 (UTC)
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