Talk:Thinkin Bout You (Frank Ocean song)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Rp0211 (talk · contribs) 02:39, 23 June 2012 (UTC)

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose):
   b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (references):
   b (citations to reliable sources):
   c (OR):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects):
   b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):
   b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

Infobox

• Information is needed in the article to verify that "quiet storm" is one of the genres of the song

You're right, I've removed it.

Lead

• ...just out of his reach and the turmoil that brings... → Change "brings" to "ensues"

Done

• ...video directed by visual art group High5Collective released on September 15... → Specify year this occurred

Done

• Ocean performed Ocean performed the track during his seven show tour... → Get rid of the first "Ocean performed"

Copy editing error, done.

Background

• At a listening part in 2012, it was confirmed that the track would appear on Ocean's Channel Orange.[6] → Change "part" to "party"

Composition

• According to WP:SAMPLE, audio recordings have to be less than 10% of the original recording (it needs to be less than 20.1 seconds and is currently 25 seconds)

Reception

• No issues

Promotion

• No issues

Chart

• Fix the table so that it is closed

Done?

References

• References 3, 6, 8 → Put publisher in
• Reference 5 → "iTunes Store" needs to be wiki-linked and should not be italicized
• References 10, 25 → "MTV" should not be italicized
• References 20, 21 → "Rolling Stone" and "Wenner Media" should not be italicized
• Reference 26 → "Billboard" and "Prometheus Global Media"

All done?

After thoroughly reviewing this article, I have decided to put it on hold at this time. There are some minor prose issues and reference formatting errors that are keeping this article from reaching good article status. I will give you the general days to fix these mistakes and/or address issues you believe do not affect good article status. If you have any questions, please feel free to ask. Rp0211 ^(talk2me) 03:05, 23 June 2012 (UTC)

Since all of the issues have been addressed, I feel confident passing this article. Congratulations and keep up the good work! Rp0211 ^(talk2me) 05:01, 23 June 2012 (UTC)