Talk:The Ring (South Park)/GA1
GA Review[edit]
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Another great article! Here's my comments and questions:
- Could you include the airdate in the lead?
- Unlink the date in the infobox, and Trey Parker should only be linked once.
- The second paragraph of the production section should be removed because it is unreferenced and unnecessary trivia.
- Why does the Theme section have an {{issues}} template?
- The last sentence of the first paragraph in the Cultural references section needs a reference.
- Spell out "13th" in the Reception section, and unlink "Kenny".
I will put the article on hold for now and do another review once you've fixed this. Good luck! :) TheLeftorium 22:45, 21 March 2009 (UTC)