Talk:The Dundies/GA1

GA Review

I've placed the GA nomination on hold. Here is my initial review:

1. The first picture's fair use rationale is substandard. I find it easier to use {{Non-free use rationale}}. RedThunder 23:52, 26 May 2008 (UTC)
2. The last sentence of the lead implies that Pam gets drunk before getting in an argument, which is not the case. RedThunder 23:46, 26 May 2008 (UTC)
3. I'm not sure that I'd describe Pam's speech as emotional. Belligerent is probably a better word. RedThunder 23:35, 26 May 2008 (UTC)
4. The review that is in box quotes is more about comparing the US series to the UK series. Instead of the box quote, how about summarizing with Seb Patrick of Noise to Signal, while comparing the US Office favorably to the UK version, writes...? RedThunder 23:38, 26 May 2008 (UTC)
5. Why does the article only describe the Nielsen ratings for the 18-49 demographic?

   It is the only one available that the press release blurb displayed, and the only one that NBC uses for press releases. RedThunder 23:52, 26 May 2008 (UTC)

   Sounds good. Ice Cold Beer (talk) 23:56, 26 May 2008 (UTC)

6. Refs 2 and 3 are IMDB, which is not a reliable source. RedThunder 23:43, 26 May 2008 (UTC)
7. Ref 6 is to Office Tally, which is a fan site and not a reliable source. The link provided for Office Tally itself links to a bunch of press releases detailing ratings for The Office. Just find the right press release and link to it. RedThunder 23:43, 26 May 2008 (UTC)

Cheers! Ice Cold Beer (talk) 22:36, 26 May 2008 (UTC)

I don't believe that point 4 has been adequately addressed. What I want is for the part of review pertaining to this episode to be paraphrased (and trimmed down). I'm sorry if I was unclear. Ice Cold Beer (talk) 00:03, 27 May 2008 (UTC)

 Done RedThunder 00:06, 27 May 2008 (UTC)

I was unclear, but I wanted it significantly trimmed. I took care of it myself. Ice Cold Beer (talk) 00:34, 27 May 2008 (UTC)

I just did my final read through of the article, and I am pleased with what I see. I'm listing it. Ice Cold Beer (talk) 00:37, 27 May 2008 (UTC)