Talk:Terry Bywater

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Date	Process	Result
September 16, 2012	Good article nominee	Listed

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The text of the entry was: Did you know ... that 2012 British Paralympic wheelchair basketball player Terry Bywater made his Paralympic debut in 2000 in Sydney?

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GA Review[edit]

This review is transcluded from Talk:Terry Bywater/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Hawkeye7 (talk · contribs) 09:45, 16 September 2012 (UTC)[reply]

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

This article only needs a few fixes

Is it reasonably well written?
A. Prose quality:
I've done a copy edit - revert anything you don't like.

B. MoS compliance for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists:
Can you use the medal templates for the Paralympics?
Done Thine Antique Pen (talk) 10:21, 16 September 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Can we link Middlesbrough - Super League - World Wheelchair Basketball Championship ?
Done World Wheelchair Basketball Championships and Middlesbrough. Super League does not have an article. Thine Antique Pen (talk) 10:14, 16 September 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
A. References to sources:

B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:

C. No original research:
Is it broad in its coverage?
A. Major aspects:
Any idea what other European clubs he has played for?
After a hunt, I cannot find which ones. Thine Antique Pen (talk) 10:14, 16 September 2012 (UTC)[reply]
No worries. Hawkeye7 (talk) 17:03, 16 September 2012 (UTC)[reply]

B. Focused:
Is it neutral?
Fair representation without bias:
Is it stable?
No edit wars, etc:
Can you update it to include the 2012 Summer Paralympics?
Done. Thine Antique Pen (talk) 10:14, 16 September 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content:

B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
Overall:
Pass or Fail:

Colour[edit]

Is there any reason for using the dark blue in the infobox as in is difficult to read the black text on the dark blue. Keith D (talk) 15:21, 16 September 2012 (UTC)[reply]

I think the author wanted to reflect team GB's colour. Tried switching to a lighter shade of blue. Hawkeye7 (talk) 17:41, 16 September 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Much clearer - thanks. Keith D (talk) 19:00, 16 September 2012 (UTC)[reply]