Talk:Talking to Yourself/Archive 1

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Did you know nomination

The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Evrik (talk) 02:18, 12 June 2023 (UTC)

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Created by MaranoFan (talk). Self-nominated at 19:48, 20 May 2023 (UTC). Post-promotion hook changes for this nom will be logged at Template talk:Did you know nominations/Talking to Yourself; consider watching this nomination, if it is successful, until the hook appears on the Main Page.

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
QPQ: Done.
Overall: @MaranoFan: Good article. though, i do wonder if "guitar and synth battle each other" should have some part of it in wikiquotes Onegreatjoke (talk) 22:50, 20 May 2023 (UTC)

GA Review

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Reviewer: Unlimitedlead (talk · contribs) 00:05, 3 June 2023 (UTC)

@MaranoFan: It is a pleasure to work with you once again. I will take on this GA review; please bear with me. Unlimitedlead (talk) 00:05, 3 June 2023 (UTC)

Thrilled that you are reviewing this, Unlimitedlead!! The pleasure is most definitely mutual :) --NØ 04:53, 3 June 2023 (UTC)

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a. (prose, spelling, and grammar):
    b. (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a. (reference section):
    b. (citations to reliable sources):
    c. (OR):
    d. (copyvio and plagiarism):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a. (major aspects):
    b. (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a. (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales):
    b. (appropriate use with suitable captions):
  7. Overall:
    Pass/fail:

(Criteria marked are unassessed)

Lead

  • "Jepsen wrote it with songwriter Simon Wilcox, and Benjamin Berger and Ryan Rabin from its production team Captain Cuts": What are you referring to when you say "its"? Are Berger and Rabin not humans?
  • I would introduce Schoolboy Records and Interscope Records as record labels.

Background and release

  • "Jepsen announced that the album, titled The Loneliest Time, will be released on October 21, 2022": As you are talking about a past event, "will be" should be "would be".
  • "Jepsen wrote "Talking to Yourself" alongside songwriter Simon Wilcox, and Benjamin Berger and Ryan Rabin from its production team Captain Cuts": See point above about the "its".
  • "School Boy and Interscope Records released...": See point above about introducing them.
  • "...along with a music video, as the album's third single, three days later": What are all these commas for?

Composition and lyrics

  • "...Eli Heisler, Berger and Wilcox programmed it...": Shouldn't this comma be a semicolon?
  • "pulsating, beat-driven": Why are there quotation marks? Is this someone speaking (if so, source the statement), or just scare quotes?

Critical reception

  • "Consequence picked the track as...": Consequence should be in italics.

Images

Can you add {{cc-by-2.0}} {{FlickreviewR|status=passed|author=Raph_PH|sourceurl=https://flickr.com/photos/69880995@N04/48986111926|archive=|reviewdate=2020-03-15 14:26:33|reviewlicense=cc-by-2.0|reviewer=FlickreviewR 2}} to File:Carly Rae Jepsen Primavera19 -146 (48986111926) (cropped).jpg?

Unfortunately, my attempt to add this to the file page was thwarted by a message saying "You do not have the permission to review images, this edit was therefore disabled". Everything else addressed upto here!--NØ 04:53, 3 June 2023 (UTC)
How strange; it did not let me to so either. Oh well. In any case, I will pass this GA nomination. It was wonderful working with you again on a quality article, and I hope to see more from you soon. Unlimitedlead (talk) 12:17, 3 June 2023 (UTC)
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