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Lead section[edit]

The first sentence should explain what Superbreak is. See Wikipedia:Brief. - added 6,6,2010 — Preceding unsigned comment added by Guoguo12 (talk • contribs) 21:19, 5 June 2010‎

Recent promotional edits[edit]

I have copyedited this article to remove the blatantly promotional and unencyclopedic language. This is supposed to be a neutrally written encyclopedia article, not free advertising space for this company. I have also marked all the assertions which have no supporting citation from a reliable source independent of the subject and removed the excessive external linkage to this company's sites, per Wikipedia:External links. The official website is more than adequate and has links to its various social networking and blog sites. Note that externally linking the article's subject in the lead goes against Wikipedia's Manual of style, and again is excessive given that there are already 2 external links to that site in the article, including the infobox.

Note to editors: If you have any affiliation whatsoever to the article's subject or its employees, either personal or professional, please read Wikipedia:Conflict of interest before attempting to edit this article again and follow the guidelines there scrupulously. Voceditenore (talk) 15:42, 20 February 2012 (UTC)[reply]