Talk:Straight Outta Cold Beer

Straight Outta Cold Beer has been listed as one of the Music good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
Review: September 9, 2017. (Reviewed version).

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GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: Cartoon network freak (talk · contribs) 21:11, 3 September 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Lead[edit]

Within its first two weeks → I think you should add "...of availablity," here
on the Country Digital Songs component chart → on [[Billboard (magazine)|Billboard]]''{{'s}}

Infobox[edit]

Flawless ;)

Background and composition[edit]

You say "Shelton began working on If I'm Honest," but you never mention the date he commenced
as the parent album's → you don't need "parent" here
to the singer's tenth studio album, If I'm Honest (2016). → you can just say "to the record" here as you have both mentioned and linked the album before
Shelton also boasts → You may want to say "the singer" here for alternation

Reception[edit]

And regarding the subject matter → "And" has to go
debuted at the number 36 → "the" is superfluous
twenty-third → 23rd
in its first week available → in its first week of availability

Track listing[edit]

Flawless ;)

Charts[edit]

Flawless ;)

Other stuff[edit]

Copy-violation[edit]

45.1% is okay if I have the quote in mind

References[edit]

As far as I checked them, the references do cover the assertations made in this article

Outcome[edit]

Very nice job with the article. I put it On hold for 7 days! Hve some fun with my comments, Cartoon network freak (talk) 12:26, 4 September 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Cartoon network freak – I completed addressing your concerns. Thank you very much. Carbrera (talk) 18:57, 9 September 2017 (UTC).[reply]

Gladly passing! Best, Cartoon network freak (talk) 19:17, 9 September 2017 (UTC)[reply]

The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.