Talk:Sanctified (song)

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Review: July 13, 2014. (Reviewed version).

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GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: DepressedPer (talk · contribs) 06:16, 11 July 2014 (UTC)[reply]

I'll be taking the position of reviewing this article. It'll take awhile so be patient.

Lead

Written well and explains the whole article.

Background

Remove the first name from "Then after Rick Ross' sixth studio album..." and "Rick Ross stated that the song...". The former should read "Then, after Ross' sixth studio album...".

Done STATic message me! 16:25, 13 July 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Recording

The quote is integrated well.

Composition and recording

"...sample of singer Betty Wright that Kanye West attempted...", remove "Kanye", no need to repeat the whole name twice in the same section.
"In the song Kanye West raps about...", replace "Kanye" with a comma in front of song.

Section Done STATic message me! 16:25, 13 July 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Critical reception

The DJBooth review ref. needs the writer doing the review, not the artist and its web link.
The AllHipHop sentence should be rewritten like "Kellin Miller of AllHipHop stated that it...".
The LA Times, EW and Consequence of Sound refs list the song as the album's best tracks. The LA Times gives a little review about the song, the other two refs. you can remove them.
"NME's Peter Cashmore said that..." should be rewritten as "Peter Cashmore of NME said that...".
The first three sentences should be condensed to two.

Does it look good to you now? STATic message me! 16:25, 13 July 2014 (UTC)[reply]

References

Refs. 1, 22 and 23 need date of the link.
Refs. 10, 12, 15, 17, 18, 22 and 23 need writer's name from the link.
Refs. 2, 19 and 20: Remove the "By" in the author line.
Ref24 needs inline citation.
Refs. 28 and 30 have accessdate tags that are different from the rest. Change them.
Ref7: Los Angeles Times' publisher is Tribune Company.
Ref17: Nme.com should be NME; the publisher is IPC Media.
Ref20: The Boston Globe's publisher is John W. Henry.

Section done Done STATic message me! 16:25, 13 July 2014 (UTC)[reply]

There's an image for the single floating around the internet that would be useful but other than that, this looks to be on its way of being a GA. DepressedPer (talk) 10:38, 12 July 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for the review man, I will be getting on all this shortly. As for the cover artwork, I believe there is no "official" cover, except for the solo Big Sean version, the ones for this version are fan-made. STATic message me! 15:14, 12 July 2014 (UTC)[reply]

I see. Okay, then that won't be needed. DepressedPer (talk) 15:21, 12 July 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Images of Rick Ross and Kanye West could help add to the article. DepressedPer (talk) 17:11, 12 July 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Makes perfect sense, I usually would have done that. It looks like everything is done and ready to go. If there is anything else let me know. STATic message me! 16:25, 13 July 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Made a few adjustments to the article; looks good to pass it as a GA. DepressedPer (talk) 17:20, 13 July 2014 (UTC)[reply]

The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.