Talk:San Marino in the Eurovision Song Contest 2014/GA1

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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 17:33, 7 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]

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Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV ()

3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant ()

Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

A good number of Eurovision articles still pending, so I will take this on shortly! --K. Peake 17:33, 7 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Infobox looks good!
"though both entries failed to qualify for the grand final" → "though the entries failed to qualify for either grand final" or something similar
"in the first semi-final," → "in the first semi-final of the Eurovision Song Contest 2014,"
"held four days later, where it" → "that was held four days later, where the nation"

Great job on not re-introducing the broadcaster like you did the past few times!
"for both 2012 and 2013" → "for 2012 and 2013"
"in the previous year's contest." → "in the Eurovision Song Contest 2013." with the wikilink

Video is a neat addition!
"a month after the conclusion of the 2013 contest" this part is not mentioned by the source

This is covered by WP:CALC, similar to how we keep using "x days later". Grk1011 (talk) 15:05, 8 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]

"On 13 March," → "On 13 March 2014,"
Remove target on snippets
Target "Maybe" to Maybe (Valentina Monetta song) on the first mention instead
Wikilink pre-order
Target dance to Dance music
"Media outlets suggested that these" → "Media outlets suggested these"
"the following day, and that the presence" → "the following day and the presence"
"program on 14 March" → "programme on 14 March 2014"
Remove comma after "Maybe"
"so that the song's meaning could be" → "so that the song could be"
"of Monetta's studio album" → "of Monetta's third studio album"
Remove excess spacing and the release year of the album in brackets

I don't understand this one? Grk1011 (talk) 15:03, 8 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Grk1011 I meant to put add the release year in brackets. --K. Peake 16:04, 8 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Done. Grk1011 (talk) 17:12, 8 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]

"they were shot at" → "the former video was shot at"
"staged a promotion tour, appearing on 5 April" → "staged a promotional tour, appearing on 5 April 2014"
"staged to serve" → "that was staged to serve"
"in the United Kingdom." → "of the United Kingdom."

Change the United Kingdom to the UK because you have already mentioned the country's full name
"was held at Copenhagen City Hall" → "was held in Copenhagen" as the source reflects
"for the Eurovision Song Contest" → "for the Eurovision Song Contest 2014"
Img looks good!
"she was joined" → "Monetta was joined"
"with bluish a fan-like cloth arrangement" → "with a fan-like cloth arrangement" unless [23] mentions bluish, then move it to being the word after a
"was by art director" → "was handled by art director"
Target grand final to Eurovision Song Contest 2014#Grand final
"San Marino qualified for" → "the nation qualified for"
[1] should also be at the end of the above sentence, as it backs that up
"In the grand final, held on," → "In the grand final of the Eurovision Song Contest 2014, held on,"
"marked nation's highest placing" → "marked the nation's highest placing"
"both the semi-finals" → "both of the semi-finals"
"were also broadcast online" → "was also available online"

"of the Eurovision Song Contest 2014." → "of the Eurovision Song Contest 2014, respectively."
"Junior Eurovision Song Contest 2013 Michele Perniola." → "Junior Eurovision Song Contest 2013, Michele Perniola."

The second table is incorrectly titled Points awarded by San Marino (Grand final)

The members are not backed up by [41] and Ghiotti should not have two dashes by her credits

On hold until all of the issues are fixed, but I am going to sleep soon so this won't be a same day pass like your others unfortunately. --K. Peake 21:30, 7 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]

I have made the requested edits. One question above though. Grk1011 (talk) 15:03, 8 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Grk1011 Sorry about the initial confusion before I cleared it up, ✓ Pass! --K. Peake 18:00, 8 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]