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A fact from SS Ironsides appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the Did you know column on 20 September 2021 (check views). The text of the entry was as follows:

Did you know... that the sister ships Ironsides and Lac La Belle sank under similar circumstances, eleven months apart?

A record of the entry may be seen at Wikipedia:Recent additions/2021/September. The nomination discussion and review may be seen at Template:Did you know nominations/SS Ironsides/SS Lac La Belle.

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GA Review[edit]

This review is transcluded from Talk:SS Ironsides/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 16:18, 2 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Comments

"Cleveland, and Lake Superior " no comma needed.
"9:30, 9:40 or 9:45 p.m" probably no need for this in the lead.
"Later during the day" perhaps "later that evening"?
"At 9:00 or 9:30 a.m., the " again, too detailed for lead.
"The wreck of Ironsides was discovered" no need for "of Ironsides"
"built on in 1864" -on.
"conflict on who built her.[1][2][3] Ironsides was built" bit repetitive and these short sentences can be merged.
The Lac La Belle article says she (an identical ship) was built by Ira Lafrinnier...
"changed to Milwaukee, Wisconsin.[11]" overlinked,
"Englemann of Milwaukee, Wisconsin, and" ditto.
"in a storm off Racine, Wisconsin.[5]" overlinked.
"199,556" probably nearest $1000 is fine.
"with 13,000 bushels of wheat," overlinked.
Lead "partially collapsed in 120 feet (36.6 m) of water" article "109 feet (33.2 m) of water, while the bow lies slightly deeper at 122 feet (37.2 m)"
"Johnston, J.E. " ref, J. E. and en-dash not spaced hyphen.
I don't see this article linked to all those incident/shipwreck templates so they shouldn't be there. That applies to all these articles, but I've only just noticed.

That's all I have. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 09:16, 3 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

@The Rambling Man: I don't know what to do about the rounding of dollars. Other than that, everything is done. GreatLakesShips (talk) 20:59, 3 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Ok, I've fixed that for you, using the template's documentation, if you add |r=-3 then it will give the inflated value to the nearest 1000 (r=-2 to the nearest 100, r=-1, nearest 10 etc). The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 07:27, 4 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Did you know nomination[edit]

The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by SL93 (talk) 06:09, 12 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

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Ironsides

... that the sister ships Ironsides (pictured) and Lac La Belle sank under similar circumstances, eleven months apart? Michigan Shipwreck Research Association

Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Powder House Island

Created by GreatLakesShips (talk). Self-nominated at 23:21, 2 September 2021 (UTC).[reply]

General: Article is new enough and long enough
New enough: Long enough:

Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Adequate sourcing: Neutral: Free of copyright violations, plagiarism, and close paraphrasing:

Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
Cited: Interesting:

Image: Image is freely licensed, used in the article, and clear at 100px.
Freely licensed: Used in article: Clear at 100px:

QPQ: Done.

Overall: SS Lac La Belle was rated a stub but I moved it to start, I think it's a bit more than stub. Not sure if that would affect the nomination if it was. But yeah, all looks good! Echetus Xe 08:08, 3 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]