Talk:Russian battleship Borodino/GA1
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Reviewer: Ed! (talk · contribs) 21:45, 16 December 2012 (UTC)
- The installed power on the infobox differs from the number given from her sea trials.
- Good catch.
- Was Serebrennikov captain of the ship for her entire service? It isn't immediately clear.
- Not sure, depends on when he was appointed, but it's probable.
- "While exact figures are not available for Borodino, it is probable that the ship was approximately 1,700 long tons (1,700 t) overweight..." -- did this slow her down?
- Uncertain, but note that she was designed for 18 knots, but only reached 16.2 during trials.
- You note in the lead that they had been bound for Port Arthur but changed directions when it was captured. I don't see this in the body of the article, and it would need a reference.
- Done.
- You mention Captain Pakenham as an observer. Where was he during the battle? Aboard a Russian ship or a Japanese one? On land? It would help to clarify his reliability as a witness.
- Clarified.
- Dup link tool returns two results: both "sister ship."
- Fixed. Thanks for the review.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 04:46, 17 December 2012 (UTC)
- External links show no problems. There are also no dab links.