Talk:Pearl Krabs/GA1
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Reviewer: Aoba47 (talk · contribs) 19:22, 15 July 2017 (UTC)
- Comments
- Add ALT text for the infobox image. Make sure that all of the images have ALT text. And please do not use “refer to caption” as an ALT text.
Done. Added ALT text for all three images on the article.
- The phrasing in the lead about the mother being one of “the program’s central mysteries” sounds a little odd to me, as it implies to me that the characters are actively searching for an answer to this. I would re-word this part to avoid mis-interpretation as the mother is just never talked about in the show.
- Done.
- Link and use the full name of the Sponge Out of Water move in the “Reception” section.
- Done.
- Should the “El” be capitalized in “El Instituto Nacional de las Mujeres”?
- Done.
- Just for clarification, have there been any other sources on the musical (i.e. sources about the actress’ approach to the role, the producers’/writers’ approach to the character/reviews)? Just wanted to double-check about this.
- There will most likely be in-depth sources like that once the musical makes its official Broadway debut in November. The sources I have are from the preview period in Chicago, when only Chicago-based critics attended.
- Final comment
- Wonderful work with this. I honestly do not have many comments. Once my review is addressed, I will pass this. Aoba47 (talk) 20:06, 15 July 2017 (UTC)
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