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this is crap[edit]

The whole article is garbage... there's not even anything to prove this person existed. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 69.144.3.19 (talk) 02:15, 2 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]

And has William Moore been heard of since? One would think he vanished after his Vegas appearance.

Cleanup tag[edit]

This article needs to be edited for POV and general readability.Lisapollison 08:43, 26 February 2007 (UTC)[reply]

ellipses[edit]

A good place to start the cleanup would be to remove the ellipses in the intro (or the whole article. I only got through the intro) They are wildly overused here and make it almost impossible to follow. I'll take a crack at it when I get time.Originalname37 19:41, 9 November 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Still needs a lot of work, but I did get rid of the ellipses.Originalname37 20:16, 9 November 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Citations & References[edit]

See Wikipedia:Footnotes for an explanation of how to generate footnotes using the <ref(erences/)> tags Nhl4hamilton (talk) 05:53, 6 February 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Disinformation claims[edit]

Given that this section makes very serious claims about a living person - Bill Moore (ufologist) - it should be held to WP:BLP. The sources should pass WP:RS, which I dispute.Autarch (talk) 21:38, 23 March 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Disinformation Campaign by Richard Doty, U.S. Air Force[edit]

It does not seem fair to the subject of the article that only a single sentence was devoted to Richard Doty's involvement. Are there any credible references to Richard Doty's story of how he drove Mr. Bennewitz over the edge? If so, suggest adding them to provide some context of why Mr. Bennewitz became absorbed with these ridiculous claims.136.34.135.202 (talk) 17:44, 10 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]