Talk:Movitz blåste en konsert

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April 8, 2022Good article nomineeListed

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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 09:43, 7 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]


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Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV ()
3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant ()
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New one for you! --K. Peake 09:43, 7 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Infobox and lead[edit]

  • Infobox looks good!
    • Thanks!
  • The subtitle info is not sourced anywhere
    • Reffed.
  • Regarding this and the other instance of a ref in the lead, you should write out and source this info in the body, but keep the prose only here; no refs are appropriate. --K. Peake 20:36, 7 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]
    • Moved.
  • The writing sentence should be the third of the first para instead
    • Moved.
  • Add a comma after 1718 opera
    • Added.
  • The ball is not sourced as being in the evening
    • Reffed.
  • Shouldn't King be capitalised like in the body?
    • Done.
  • "The song strikes a refined tone," → "It strikes a refined tone,"
    • I think the noun is better at the start of the paragraph.
  • Using the song to start two consecutive sentences is a bad idea, but this sentence had been moved around to create this context so I copyedited for you. --K. Peake 06:48, 8 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Context[edit]

  • Pipe Swedish ballad tradition to Scandinavian ballad tradition
    • Have made it point to the new Sweden section of that article.
  • Second para looks good!
    • Thanks!

Song[edit]

Music[edit]

  • Add relevant text to the audio sample
    • Added.
  • "consisting of twelve lines." → "consisting of 12 lines." per MOS:NUM
    • Done.
  • Write epistle No. 12 instead
    • Done.

Lyrics[edit]

  • Why is there spaces before lines for Paul Britten Austin's verse?
    • You mean the indentations of some lines? That's Paul Britten Austin's formatting, indicating sections of the verse.
  • Oh, thank you for explaining. --K. Peake 06:48, 8 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Reception and legacy[edit]

  • Pipe Lake Mälaren to Mälaren, Djurgården Park to Djurgården and Bensvarvars to Ge rum i Bröllopsgåln din hund! on the img text
    • Done.
  • Pipe to Air (music) should solely be on "air"
    • Done.
  • "before the singing and" → "After this, the singing and"
    • Done.
  • [13] should be solely at the end of the sentence
    • Done.
  • I don't think "lending an air" is very appropriate; try something more encyclopedic
    • Edited.
  • That looks a lot smoother! --K. Peake 06:48, 8 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Notes[edit]

  • Good
    • Thanks.

References[edit]

  • Copyvio score looks pretty good at 30.6%!!!
    • Noted.
  • Why is ref 12 missing the language parameter?
    • Added. I didn't think "Epistel No. 51" worth translating but I've done it now anyway.

Sources[edit]

  • Good
    • Noted.

External links[edit]

  • Good
    • Noted.

Final comments and verdict[edit]

  •  On hold until all of the issues are fixed; I left a comment above where you did not work on the lead properly. --K. Peake 20:36, 7 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]
  • ✓ Pass time, once again I am very satisfied with your quick responses! --K. Peake 06:48, 8 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]
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