Talk:Louis A. Gottschalk

Review comments

Some suggestions for improvement as the article is expanded:

• Template:Infobox Scientist should be added
• Photograph should be added from a source with a free license
• Basic biographical information required, including precise date and place of birth, positions held (with dates)
• Article needs expanding and should emphasise reasons for notability of subject
• After expansion, article should be divided into appropriate subheadings
• One sentence paragraphs should be amalgamated
• Information on research should be expanded and references required
• Information on writings should be expanded; a list of works would be useful
• References should be expanded and preferably converted to inline format with reference list (not external links)
• External link present which could be used to expand article

Espresso Addict 09:18, 19 July 2007 (UTC)