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@Ankit.choudhury.23: Nice work on your draft. A few relatively small changes

Only capitalize the first word of section headers. So "Jrk mutant phenotypes" rather than "Jrk Mutant Phenotypes"
References go after punctuation, not before. You have a few of the wrong type
In the Structure section you have

Start site: 7,763,233

Stop site: 7,775,603

It's better to put this information into sentences rather that sentence fragments like this. The next best choice is to use bullet points.

Other than that, it looks good. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 15:54, 18 April 2019 (UTC)[reply]