Talk:Jab Tak Hai Jaan/GA1

GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: Dr. Blofeld (talk · contribs) 17:18, 11 August 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Will review probably Tuesday.♦ Dr. ☠ Blofeld 17:18, 11 August 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Lead

Link Discovery Channel

Done - Linked

Cast

Shahrukh Khan as major Samar Anand. Major should be capitalized as a title.

Done - Capitalized

Production

Diwali, wikilink? A note before saying whatever type of festival etc it is would help for non-Indian/Hindu readers.

Done - Linked and added note

Filming

Wikilink Shepherd's Bush and Kashmir.

Done - Linked

Soundrack

It was released by YRF Music on 9 October 2012.-Citation needed.

Done - Given source from iTunes

Awards

Section is entirely unsourced.

Done - Added sources

Records

" and the third-highest-grossing Bollywood film that year", can you say, after xxx and xxx, interested to know the top two grossers.

Done - The top two grossers were Ek Tha Tiger and Dabangg 2, mentioned that

Article looks in great shape.Dr. Blofeld 10:35, 13 August 2013 (UTC)[reply]

All points done, thank you.----Plea$ant 1623 ✉ 12:01, 13 August 2013 (UTC)[reply]

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

Is it reasonably well written?
A. Prose quality:

B. MoS compliance:
Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
A. References to sources:

B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:

C. No original research:
Is it broad in its coverage?
A. Major aspects:

B. Focused:
Is it neutral?
Fair representation without bias:
Is it stable?
No edit wars, etc:
Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:

B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
Overall:
Pass or Fail:

Very well done! I think if you could find a bit more on production/themes it has FA potential. ♦ Dr. Blofeld 12:17, 13 August 2013 (UTC)[reply]

A very, very, very big thank you! Yeah, I'll try to find some references on production/themes. Thanks again, Blofeld ----Plea$ant 1623 ✉ 12:22, 13 August 2013 (UTC)[reply]