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GA Review[edit]

This review is transcluded from Talk:I Won't Say (I'm in Love)/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Carbrera (talk · contribs) 03:37, 6 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Infobox[edit]

You can remove the following unnecessary infobox parameters:

"Cover"
"Alt"
"Caption"

Done.--Changedforbetter (talk) 00:04, 15 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Unlink "Alan Menken" from the "Producer" parameter since you already linked him above in the "Writer" parameter

Done.--Changedforbetter (talk) 00:05, 15 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Lead[edit]

Paragraph 1[edit]

Since Cheryl Freeman is the only other credited musician as the artist(s) of the song, I would list her first after "while singers..."

Done.--Changedforbetter (talk) 00:08, 15 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Paragraph 2[edit]

The correct wording is "Motown", not "Mowtown"

Done. Can't believe I made that mistake hahahaha, how embarrassing.--Changedforbetter (talk) 19:59, 16 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Paragraph 3[edit]

Link "music critics" to the article "Music journalism" please

Done.--Changedforbetter (talk) 19:59, 16 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Background and context[edit]

Paragraph 1[edit]

Remove the extra space after "literal" please

Done.--Changedforbetter (talk) 19:59, 16 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]

That last sentence is way long; perhaps you could remove "featuring lyrics that Meg herself would never have sung," for the same effect?

Done.--Changedforbetter (talk) 19:59, 16 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Paragraph 2[edit]

Again, since Cheryl Freeman is the only other credited musician as the artist(s) of the song, I would list her first after "Familiar with..."

Done.--Changedforbetter (talk) 19:59, 16 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Add "musicians" after "Familiar with" please

Done, but substituted "musicians" for "singers"; hope that's okay.

Paragraph 3[edit]

American English: Change "realisation" --> "realization"

Done.

Music and lyrics[edit]

Paragraph 2[edit]

The link to "Parody" through "parodies" is unnecessary; please remove it

Done, removed.--Changedforbetter (talk) 19:59, 16 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Reception[edit]

Link "music critics" and "film critics" here in the lead sentence please to the aforementioned articles

Done.

Irving Tan's review is very, very long; please trim here and there

Done; removed "which has gotten uncomfortably crass and increasingly unsubtle over the years" and "for that swooning female friend in your life..."

Since the list listed also acts as the title, it would be correct to capitalize the statement as "The Best Ever Disney Songs"

Done.--Changedforbetter (talk) 19:59, 16 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Cover versions[edit]

All good! Great work

Thanks!

External links[edit]

Alphabetize the categories please; the only ones out of place are "Disney's Hercules" and "Love themes"

Done.--Changedforbetter (talk) 19:59, 16 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]

End of GA Review:[edit]

Very well-written articles with minor issues. Seven days for changes to be made ("on hold"); good luck! Thanks! Cheers, Carbrera (talk) 22:15, 14 June 2016 (UTC).[reply]

I think I've covered just about everything! Awaiting your verdict :-)--Changedforbetter (talk) 19:59, 16 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Great work. Thanks again! Cheers, Carbrera (talk) 21:24, 16 June 2016 (UTC).[reply]