Talk:Hurricane Jimena (2009)/GA2
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Reviewer: Sp33dyphil "Ad astra" 01:30, 6 August 2011 (UTC)
- "$97.5 million" MXN$ or US$? You need to indicate this for every $ figure from here on in.
- "El Imparcial" or "Elimparcial"? Is it a newspaper? If yes, it should be italicised.
- "off Mexico's Pacific Coast" Coast shouldn't be italised.
- "Two days after developing" --> "Two days after the start of development"?
- "NHC" should come after the first mention of "National Hurricane Center", and thereafter should only be mentioned as "NHC".'
- "becoming a major hurricane" how's a major hurricane different from a "regular" one?
- "Jimena
weakened back to areturned to tropical storm status over land" - "brownout reduced visibility by 1/4" what's a brownout and 1/4?
- "Two powerlines also fell
down" try "fell up".- Changed, but I don't like the new wording. 14:37, 13 August 2011 (UTC)
- "upgraded
into Category 2" - "The The United" duplication
- "180 vulnerable families" what role does vulnerable play?
- According to Checklinks, there are four dead links.
- FN 1 it's either "Pronounce Names" or "Pornouncenames.com"
- FN 5 check formatting.
- standardise date style.
- On the NCDC links, the date is not known, so I include the year, but fixed the rest.YE Pacific Hurricane 14:37, 13 August 2011 (UTC)
- Issue not fixed – I see both DMY and YMD styles. Plus I don't think "Staff Writer" is really needed for the refs (of course someone has to write it!) Sp33dyphil "Ad astra" 10:43, 14 August 2011 (UTC)
- On the NCDC links, the date is not known, so I include the year, but fixed the rest.YE Pacific Hurricane 14:37, 13 August 2011 (UTC)
- End note
- I'm very happy with the article; it meets all evert GA criterion. I hope to see this page at FAC. Until then, have fun! Sp33dyphil "Ad astra" 06:17, 17 August 2011 (UTC)