Talk:Hasta la Raíz (song)/GA2

GA Review

Reviewer: Carbrera (talk · contribs) 02:38, 31 March 2016 (UTC)

Hello, I am Carbrera, and I'll be reviewing this article for possible good article submission.

Full review coming very soon. Carbrera (talk) 02:38, 31 March 2016 (UTC)

Infobox

• Please note, I will be reassessing the article completely, regardless of my previous comments and suggestions; please keep this is mind
• Remove the 'caption' area below the 'alt

FIXED. Javier Espinoza (talk) 01:39, 1 April 2016 (UTC)

Lead

Paragraph 1

• "attaining success with her previous..." → "attaining success from her previous..."

FIXED. Javier Espinoza (talk) 01:39, 1 April 2016 (UTC)

• "with very personal feelings..." → "with personal feelings"

FIXED. Javier Espinoza (talk) 01:39, 1 April 2016 (UTC)

Paragraph 2

• "Upon its release..." → "After its release..."

FIXED. Javier Espinoza (talk) 01:39, 1 April 2016 (UTC)

• "received positive reviews from music critics and peaked at number 17... and number five..." → "received positive reviews from music critics. The song was also commercially successful, peaking at number 17... and number five..."

FIXED. Javier Espinoza (talk) 01:39, 1 April 2016 (UTC)

• "ranked in the list..." → "on the list..."

FIXED. Javier Espinoza (talk) 01:39, 1 April 2016 (UTC)

Background

• This first sentence is still extremely long; can you try to condense it?

FIXED. Javier Espinoza (talk) 01:39, 1 April 2016 (UTC)

• Add an apostrophe s after Agustín Lara

FIXED. Javier Espinoza (talk) 01:39, 1 April 2016 (UTC)

Writing and recording

Paragraph 1

• "were similar from her previous albums..." → "were too similar compared to her previous albums..."

FIXED. Javier Espinoza (talk) 01:39, 1 April 2016 (UTC)

Critical reception

• I know I said to say "upon", but "After" would sound better with the current tense

FIXED. Javier Espinoza (talk) 01:39, 1 April 2016 (UTC)

Commercial reception

• "was released as the first promotional single from the..." → "was released as a promotional single from the..."

FIXED. Javier Espinoza (talk) 01:39, 1 April 2016 (UTC)

Track listing

• You only include the download for a version called "Canova's Root"; is there a normal download for the album version/single version?

There used to be one, on iTunes, but after the relase of the whole album, the single download is no longer available as a "single". Javier Espinoza (talk) 01:39, 1 April 2016 (UTC)

End of GA Review:

Overall, a very good article. Most of these comments are regarding tense/grammar. Once fixed, the article will surely pass. Thanks again! Carbrera (talk) 22:40, 31 March 2016 (UTC)

Thanks! .Javier Espinoza (talk) 01:39, 1 April 2016 (UTC)