Talk:Gran Guerrero/GA1

GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 20:22, 1 February 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Shall review this. MWright96 (talk) 20:22, 1 February 2019 (UTC)[reply]

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects): b (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall:
Pass/Fail:

"Revealing that he was training for a professional wrestling career." - He revelaled
"in the case of Último Guerrero Jr." - in Último Guerrero Jr.'s case.
"it was later confirmed that there was a blood relationship between the two" - It was

All mentions of Jr. in this section of the article should have the comma omitted per MOS:JR
"Between 2010 and 2011 only occasionally wrestled matches" - Between 2010 and 2011, he only
"Taurus teamed up with his older brother Último Guerrero. The team-up indicated the family relationship as they competed in a for Toryumon Mexico" - competed for a Toryumon Mexico
"Taurus made his in-ring debut for CMLL on June 18, 2012," - Taurus made his CMLL in-ring debut
"where a rookie and a veteran team up." - pair up for variety?
"a tournament that focuses primarily on younger wrestlers or wrestlers who work in the lower ranks of the promotion," - or those who work in the promotion's lower ranks,
"to earn a spot in the finals the following week against Soberano, Jr." - to earn a finals spot against Soberano Jr. the following week.
"Taurus would team up with veteran Averno and compete in Block A" - Taurus teamed with veteran Averno and competed in Block A

"During the celebration of Atlantis' 30th anniversary as a wrestler, Último Guerrero appeared after a match to berate Atlantis," - him
Delink Japanese as the country is a major geographical region
"initially by accidentally causing them to lose matches due to miscommunication" - to a miscommunication
"between Niebla Roja and Euforia and Gran Guerrero." - between Nibela Roja, Euforia and Gran Guerrero.
"and demanded that Niebla Roja had to come up with a new mask" - and demanded Niebla Roja to come up with a new mask
"followed by defeating Dragon Lee and Místico in the finals on the next day." - followed by beating Dragon Lee and Místico II in the next day's finals.
"Los Guerreros Lagunero ended Sky Team's 1,223-day reign with the CMLL World Trios Championship as they defeated the Sky Team" - them

"It is traditional for an enmascarado to keep their private lives a secret from the wrestling fans," - to conceal their private lives from wrestling fans,

A reliable citation to the claim of FMLL Tag Team Championship (1 time) – with Último Guerrero is lacking here

References 9, 10, 15, 16, 19 are lacking the authors of their respective works
References 4, 15 and 30 are missing their translated titles
The trans-title in Reference 26 is not correctly formatting and requires attention
Reference 28 is incorrectly formatted and needs proper work on it

Those were all the quibbles I discovered. The review will be put on hold for the time being. MWright96 (talk) 12:47, 2 February 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you for the feedback, I am working on it now. What it wrong with 28? I cannot see the problem. MPJ-DK (talk) 22:01, 2 February 2019 (UTC)[reply]
- I believe I have addressed all concerns listed here. Thank you. MPJ-DK (talk) 22:25, 2 February 2019 (UTC)[reply]
  - @MPJ-DK: Alright then, going to promote this article to GA class. MWright96 (talk) 11:57, 3 February 2019 (UTC)[reply]