Talk:EMC Elastic Cloud Storage

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Sourcing[edit]

I deleted a section which was sourced to EMC press releases or copies of press releases, and blogs. This amounts to corporate WP:PROMO which is strictly disallowed on this encyclopedia. Further I asked at WP:RSN here if the Enterprise Strategy Group whitepapers are considered reliable sources. - Brianhe (talk) 00:04, 19 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Quality[edit]

This is pretty low quality article that has clearly been written by transcribing a press release. In particular, from a technical perspective, a lot of the sentence do not actually make any sense whatsoever — Preceding unsigned comment added by SteveLoughran (talk • contribs) 17:38, 11 December 2016 (UTC)[reply]

@SteveLoughran: Steve, I agree, this is a mess. Sometimes with articles with WP:PROMO problems like this, the best thing is to pare it back to the minimum and wait for better content to come along. I suggest you be bold and make changes you think are appropriate. - Brianhe (talk) 18:28, 11 December 2016 (UTC)[reply]

@Brianhe: I appreciate your encouragement, but as I effectively work full time on open source storage systems, there's a CoI risk there: I'd be too negative