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A fact from Domestic violence in Pakistan appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the Did you know column on 6 September 2012 (check views). The text of the entry was as follows:

Did you know... that domestic violence in Pakistan has been described as "endemic in all social spheres"?

A record of the entry may be seen at Wikipedia:Recent additions/2012/September. The nomination discussion and review may be seen at Template:Did you know nominations/Domestic violence in Pakistan.

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"it is followed by India and Somalia.[5] "[edit]

WTF ? Somalia is safer for women than India ? the site referred is a joke. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 2405:204:918F:2FB6:61D5:2FA0:106A:A800 (talk) 10:28, 18 July 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Peer Review 1[edit]

I really like how the article edits are coming along. It's very informative. I would consider putting the section on Factors before the section on Impact on women. Perhaps you could also find more informative graphics that wouldn't be too graphic given the topic. I think there is also a good number of sources and intriguing statistics.

MYao (talk) 03:52, 7 March 2017 (UTC)MYao[reply]

Peer Review 2[edit]

This is a well-researched, evenly-covered article! The structure of the article is very clear, and it makes it easy to follow. I think it could be improved even more by making it more accessible to readers from non-academic backgrounds and by adding some more visual elements to break up the chunks of text. All in all, well done! Cpm5 (talk) 19:49, 27 March 2017 (UTC)[reply]

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