Talk:Country Bill's/GA1

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GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: TBrandley (talk · contribs) 23:22, 21 November 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Done. --Another Believer (Talk) 17:56, 22 November 2012 (UTC)[reply]
  • Same goes for "seafood", "hamburger", "fries", and "cheesecake"
Done. --Another Believer (Talk) 17:56, 22 November 2012 (UTC)[reply]
  • "available to new tenants" minor prose issue, "to" should be "for"
Done. --Another Believer (Talk) 17:56, 22 November 2012 (UTC)[reply]
  • "$600" clarify that is the US dollar, I assume
Done. By linking the "$" sign to the "Dollar" article. --Another Believer (Talk) 18:21, 22 November 2012 (UTC)[reply]
  • "In 1978 the" remember to use American grammar, a comma should be place after the year "1978", the current way is actually British English
Done. --Another Believer (Talk) 18:21, 22 November 2012 (UTC)[reply]
  • "many" change to "numerous" for prose
Done. --Another Believer (Talk) 18:21, 22 November 2012 (UTC)[reply]
  • "$975,000" again, clarify American dollars, I again assume
I think this is implied based on geography and the previous link to the US Dollar. --Another Believer (Talk) 18:21, 22 November 2012 (UTC)[reply]
  • "in 2012 the" again, add comma after year
Done. --Another Believer (Talk) 18:21, 22 November 2012 (UTC)[reply]
  • "first operating as a hamburger stand then becoming a steakhouse and seafood restaurant" prose isn't great there, try "originally serving as a hamburger stand, before becoming a steakhouse and seafood restaurant"
Done. --Another Believer (Talk) 18:21, 22 November 2012 (UTC)[reply]
  • "In his 2010 review" I don't believe the year is of significant importance, and therefore should be removed, in my opinion
Done. --Another Believer (Talk) 18:21, 22 November 2012 (UTC)[reply]
  • Same seems to go for "In March 2012" in that review section
Done. --Another Believer (Talk) 18:21, 22 November 2012 (UTC)[reply]
  • "panelling" American English is with just one "l", remove one "l" please; as this is an American place
Done. --Another Believer (Talk) 18:21, 22 November 2012 (UTC)[reply]
  • "70%" write out fully as "70 percent"
Done. --Another Believer (Talk) 18:21, 22 November 2012 (UTC)[reply]
  • "RingSide Steakhouse" how is that related to this?
Just another steakhouse in Portland, probably the most well-known. I do not feel strongly it must stay, but I thought it was related enough to include. --18:21, 22 November 2012 (UTC)
  • Add "United States portal" please
Done. --Another Believer (Talk) 18:21, 22 November 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Overall; good job. Once the above issues are addressed, I will pass the article based on the good article criteria. Well done! TBrandley 00:38, 22 November 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks so much for your time and assistance. Please let me know if there are any other concerns needing to be addressed. --Another Believer (Talk) 18:21, 22 November 2012 (UTC)[reply]
No problem, looks great now, and I therefore pass the article. Happy Thanksgiving, TBrandley 00:02, 23 November 2012 (UTC)[reply]
The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.
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