Talk:Circles of Sustainability

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Removal of Criticisms[edit]

NOTICE for removal of this section There is evidence that this index is being used and further developed.

YES remove it. contribs) 11:33, 27 January 2015 (UTC) — Preceding unsigned comment added by Mkevlar[reply]

If nobody provides input on this discussion by Febuary 1 2015 I will be removing the Criticism section. comment added by Mkevlar

Undoing the change by an unsigned account without offering proof of the index is still in use is not acceptable. I am reinstating the previous edit TheKevlar (talk) 03:20, 10 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Copying and close paraphrasing[edit]

It appears that much of this article has been copied or closely paraphrased from http://citiespro.pmhclients.com/images/uploads/Indicators_-_Briefing_Paper.pdf or a similar UN document. Short quotes are okay but we need to credit them to the source. I suggest the whole article be reviewed and compared to all other cited sources to ensure we're not violating copyrights and we're properly paraphrasing, not copying them. Joja lozzo 14:03, 8 September 2012 (UTC)[reply]

This seems to have been rectified. PP 13 November 2012 — Preceding unsigned comment added by 116.237.41.254 (talk) 06:26, 13 November 2012 (UTC)[reply]

I have reviewed the article and it now reads well. However, it needs more more material on the kinds of use to which the method has been applied and the outcomes. 113.28.20.236 (talk) 11:19, 18 November 2012 (UTC)[reply]

No problem about the paraphrasing. I think that it now needs more on how the actual method works. 120.144.45.185 (talk) 04:54, 19 November 2012 (UTC)[reply]