Talk:Candy (Baekhyun song)

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Did you know... that Baekhyun compares his charms to various flavors of candy in his song "Candy"?

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The result was: promoted by The Squirrel Conspiracy (talk) 23:01, 31 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]

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~~... that the lyrics of Baekhyun's song "Candy" references various flavors of candy including, cinnamon, mint, strawberry and bubble gum?~~ [1][2]

Reviewed: Swedish torch

5x expanded by Ashleyyoursmile (talk). Self-nominated at 10:41, 10 July 2020 (UTC).[reply]

General: Article is new enough and long enough
New enough: Long enough:

Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Adequate sourcing: Neutral: Free of copyright violations, plagiarism, and close paraphrasing:

Hook eligibility:

Cited:
Interesting:

QPQ: Done.

Overall: The hook is not interesting to me. Surely, the lyrics for a song titled "Candy" should contain references to candy and not references to automobiles. Sorry. Jeromi Mikhael (talk) 12:05, 14 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]

I have to agree. I personally don't find the hook very interesting. What else would a song called "Candy" reference? — Yours, Berrely • ^Talk∕_Contribs 12:49, 14 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Personally I thought the hook was kind of interesting, although the original hook could be revised a bit: perhaps mentioning the "Baekhyun compares his charms" part more explicitly might improve it? I tried looking for alternative hook facts in the article but none seemed to be suitable. Narutolovehinata5 ^tccsdnew 04:06, 15 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]

ALT1: ... that Baekhyun compares his charms to various flavors of candy in his song "Candy"?

@Narutolovehinata5: Thank you for your suggestion, came up with ALT1. Jeromi Mikhael, Berrely, Is this going to work? Ashley yoursmile! 09:18, 15 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]

@Ashleyyoursmile:

General: Article is new enough and long enough
New enough: Long enough:

Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Adequate sourcing: Neutral: Free of copyright violations, plagiarism, and close paraphrasing:

Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
Cited: Interesting:

QPQ: Done.

Overall:

That's better. Jeromi Mikhael (talk) 09:44, 15 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]