Talk:Bandslam/GA1

GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: Zanimum (talk · contribs) 11:38, 10 June 2014 (UTC)[reply]

I've watched the film, so I'll review. -- Zanimum (talk) 11:38, 10 June 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Home media

"In the rest of the world, specified in the countries where the film was released, a DVD was also released between December 2009 and January 2010." Clumsy, slightly repeatitive, and confusing.

extra's --> extras (you have two cows, not two cow's)
"I Can't Go On, I'll Go on" needs quotation marks, and On needs a capital.
"Internationally, a trailer in the language of the country the DVD is released in is also featured." --> "International releases included a trailer in the local language"

Fixed. DepressedPer (talk) 02:51, 19 June 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Soundtrack

Is there an association with Disney beyond the Hollywood Records release? It's strange that the WDP soundtracks exec would be talking; even though this is a soundtrack, and it was released by a Disney company, it's not a WDP soundtrack.

Removed it. DepressedPer (talk) 02:52, 19 June 2014 (UTC)[reply]

There's a start. -- Zanimum (talk) 21:43, 18 June 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Passing Production, after having made a few small alterations.

Marketing

I don't see the $10M figure on the IMDb page sourced. That said, IMDb is not always the best source. Any marketing cost reference in Variety or another source?
"as part of the film's gimmick" sounds like it's part of an overarching gimmick. The induction was a stunt, but the phrasing was misleading. I've changed it.

Changed the source for the marketing budget. DepressedPer (talk) 17:05, 21 June 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Always remember to put context. The name of a writer is "whoever", unless you mention their outlet, which likely had greater name recognition. The name of a theatre is "whatever", if you don't say where the theatre is. With quotes, you can make stylistic changes, like italicizing titles. -- Zanimum (talk) 15:24, 21 June 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Cast and characters

Bowie... early February of what year?

Passing External links.

I think it's just the lead, Plot, and references left. -- Zanimum (talk) 17:53, 25 June 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Sorry for the delay, reviewed the rest, passing. -- Zanimum (talk) 00:01, 9 July 2014 (UTC)[reply]

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