Talk:Babylon 5/to do

Languages Section

Andreas Katsulas does not use a British accent in playing G'Kar. It's more correct to call that "standard English" or "mid-Atlantic English."

Religion Section

The Jesuits are not a different religion. They are a religious order of men (ie. priests, deacons and brothers) within the Catholic Church.

Well written

Weak Pass.
- Further improve: Work on overall flow. The sections do not gel well with each other as a single article. Transitions need to be better. Too many lists that could be broken off or turned into prose. Subcategories should be parallel in format. Done

Factually Accurate

Failed. Citations.
- Provide some sort of reference to avoid the appearance of original research: WP:CITE.

Broad Coverage

NPOV

Stable

Appropriate Images

Passed.
- Further improve: Caption quality needs to be consistent. "Another shot of the Babylon 5 station" is inadequate being that the largest object in the photo is a planet of some sort which is unidentified. Done

Real-world context for articles dealing with fiction

Failed. Too fan centric:
- "Cast and primary characters" section: List should be Actor, Character (not other way around). The real-world context is an actor played a character (encyclopedia) - not the character was brought to life by an actor (fansite). Done Koweja 18:50, 13 May 2006 (UTC)[reply]
- "Babylon stations" section: Reads like the fictional universe is real. Needs real-world context for readers who are unfamiliar with the series. Done --Angelstorm 10:55, 15 May 2006 (UTC)[reply]
- ~~"Ethnicity and language of characters" section: Reads like the fictional universe is real. Needs real-world context for readers who are unfamiliar with the series~~ Section Removed
- ~~"Usage of English" section: Reads like the fictional universe is real. Needs real-world context for readers who are unfamiliar with the series~~ Section Removed

Length

Failed. Too long
- Consider moving the lengthy "Novels, novelizations, short stories, and comic books" list to its own article. Done Koweja 18:50, 13 May 2006 (UTC)[reply]