Talk:Among Us/Archives/2020/November

Grammar/prose improvements

Just a heads up, I've gone ahead and made improvements to the the grammar/prose and general flow of much of the article. I think this should have been given more weight in the GA review. In particular, there were lots of run-on sentences with too many commas and semicolons, extra wordiness and redundancy in some sections, and the section on the hacking read like a news article. I also think think there was/is an over-reliance on direct quotes from the devs, but that's not so much of a grammar issue. I know this is somewhat of a high-profile article, so if anyone has any objection to my edits, please let me know. The Only Zac (talk) 06:25, 31 October 2020 (UTC)

Go ahead and correct all the prose and grammar issues you want. Any edit that improves the article in some way is allowed, even correcting grammar issues. You can even do a GA reassessment if you believe that this article doesn't meet the criteria. Lazman321 (talk) 18:51, 4 November 2020 (UTC)

Semi-protected edit request on 11 November 2020

The fourteenth word of the last sentence of the second paragraph is spelled wrong. It should be changed from ‘Imposters’ to ’Impostors’. 71.178.41.80 (talk) 23:59, 11 November 2020 (UTC)

Wait, never mind, I just realised that ‘imposter’ is also correct. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 71.178.41.80 (talk) 00:03, 12 November 2020 (UTC)

Semi-protected edit request on 11 November 2020

I hope I'm doing this edit request thing correctly. The problem is that "Henry Stickmin" redirects here, which I think is stupid, as arguably, Henry Stickmin is more notable then Among Us. Hmm, maybe an AFC would be the more proper thing to do here, but I'm a lazy IP editor with no account and only a little bit of a grasp on how this all works. 24.236.225.133 (talk) 04:09, 12 November 2020 (UTC)

Hi IP editor, this isn't the place to request a new article. Please read WP:YFA for more. Henry Stickmin used to be an article - see its history. Seagull123 Φ 16:18, 13 November 2020 (UTC) Seagull123 Φ 16:18, 13 November 2020 (UTC)

Semi-protected image edit request on 13 November 2020

I would like to add some images of the available DLC content you can acquire in the game.

https://gamertweak.com/wp-content/uploads/2020/09/among-us-how-to-get-all-skins.jpg

https://progameguides.com/wp-content/uploads/2020/09/among-us-pets-selection-900x506.jpg

https://freegametips.com/wp-content/uploads/2020/09/1599840494_648_Among-Us-all-skins-pets-and-hats-how-to.jpg Hawkiloo (talk) 03:01, 13 November 2020 (UTC)

 Not done: Please make your request for a new image to be uploaded to Files For Upload. Once the file has been properly uploaded, feel free to reactivate this request to have the new image used. Please note that all images must comply with Wikipedia's image use policy, particularly where copyright is concerned. ‑‑ElHef (Meep?) 03:05, 13 November 2020 (UTC)

Semi-protected edit request on 17 November 2020

There is some grammar that needs editing VelocityYoyo777JJ (talk) 02:17, 17 November 2020 (UTC)

 Not done: it's not clear what changes you want to be made. Please mention the specific changes in a "change X to Y" format and provide a reliable source if appropriate. — The Only Zac (talk) 03:40, 17 November 2020 (UTC)

Semi-protected edit request on 26 November 2020

Please Split into 2 articles please split some of it to a intersloth article as it tersloth is the publisher and developer of the game 2600:8805:BC82:2300:184E:4C00:6E5E:306E (talk) 21:38, 26 November 2020 (UTC)

 Not done: InnerSloth was an article, but due to a deletion discussion, it was decided to be redirected here. The reason given was Non-notable video game developer failing WP:GNG with no reliable independent in-depth sources, such as WP:VG/RS. In particular, none are significant coverage of the subject. SWinxy (talk) 21:41, 26 November 2020 (UTC)