Talk:All Burma Federation of Student Unions

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This article has been rated as Mid-importance on the project's importance scale.

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tone issues, sep 2015[edit]

The history section is organized in such a fashion to emphasise the connections between this organization and several movements and individuals and their accomplishments, rather than primarily accounting what this organization has done and its own platform and place within those movements. There are a couple explicit grammar/tone issues, like the use of 'our' and encyclopedic, flowery language that emphasises the scope rather than the nature of actions. These give the article a subject-positive, Burmese point of view that is positional and not neutral. romnempire (talk) 22:36, 10 September 2015 (UTC)[reply]