Talk:Adentro/GA1

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GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: Robin (talk · contribs) 12:38, 19 March 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Refs
Lead
  • Delink Adentro tour as it doesn't have an article.
    •  Done
Recording
  • On an interview -- In which interview?
    •  Done
  • I re-titled this section because the sub-section wasn't needed (too small) and included more background information than compositional information.
  • These sentences - The song received negative response due to its theme, on which the singer commented that the song had "the most beautiful lyrics from Adentro,"[7][8] further stating that "more than hitting me, they [the criticism] saddens me."[8] He also stated that "criticism is a symptom of envy. - Lack clarity and seem to be translated from Spanish. I suggest removing it completely or re-structure the sentencing and move it to the critical reception section, where it belongs.
    •  Done.
Tour and Fundacion Adentro
  • The foundation, as stated, doesn't have anything to do with the album except for sharing the same name. Remove.
    •  Not done, the foundation, as stated, is named after the album.
  • I think this section should be merged with the singles' section, to give the article more body.
    •  Done
Commercial performance
  • the album became Arjona's third album to do so -- do what?
    •  Done, I believe he was hinting at being certified in Argentina.
Critical reception
  • Too many quotes - try writing most of them in your own words.
    •  Done
  • Delink AllMusic as it is linked in the recording section.
    •  Done


On hold. — Robin (talk) 13:55, 19 March 2013 (UTC)[reply]

All done! — DivaKnockouts 20:24, 21 March 2013 (UTC)[reply]
I gave the article one last copy-edit. — Robin (talk) 17:43, 22 March 2013 (UTC)[reply]
By the way, this is very thoughtful of you, DivaKnockouts! — Robin (talk) 17:43, 22 March 2013 (UTC)[reply]
Passing. — Robin (talk) 17:43, 22 March 2013 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks for that Robin! Regards. — DivaKnockouts 18:04, 22 March 2013 (UTC)[reply]