Talk:A Rugrats Kwanzaa/GA1
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Reviewer: Yashthepunisher (talk · contribs) 14:53, 16 July 2019 (UTC)
I will be reviewing this article. Thank you. Yashthepunisher (talk) 14:53, 16 July 2019 (UTC)
- Lead
- "during a visit from her great-Aunt". 'A' shouldn't be in caps for Aunt.
- "Tommy Pickles, Chuckie and Kimi Finster, and Phil and Lil Deville and family." There are three 'ands' in this sentence.
- "learn about Kwanzaa from Aunt T. Susie". Why 'a' is in caps here? Or is it normal in American English? Pardon my ignorance.
- Capitalizing familial titles is definitely not the norm in American English. The show is from the perspective of babies and toddlers, and they use "Aunt T" as the character's name. I have also gone according to the sources, which capitalize the character's name since it is used as her name for the show. Do you think adding a footnote or something like that would help to clarify this point? Aoba47 (talk) 16:51, 17 July 2019 (UTC)
- I don't think that's necessary. Yashthepunisher (talk) 08:12, 18 July 2019 (UTC)
- Wikilink Nickelodeon in the second sentence of the second para.
- Production
- "Other guest appearances in the episode include Kevin Michael Richardson". The use of 'other' in this sentence is quite not clear to me. This section does not mention anything about guest appearances before this sentence.
- Sources
- Mention the channel names in YouTube refs.
Aoba47 That's it from me. The rest looks fine. Great work on the article. Yashthepunisher (talk) 05:30, 17 July 2019 (UTC)
It's a pass. Yashthepunisher (talk) 08:12, 18 July 2019 (UTC)
The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.