Talk:2009 Price Chopper 400/GA1
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Reviewer: Kpgjhpjm (talk · contribs) 04:23, 28 April 2019 (UTC)
Lead[edit]
- in Kansas City, Kansas, at Kansas Speedway --> at Kansas Speedway
- before a crowd of 100,000 attendees --> before a crowd of 100,000 spectators
- from the fifth position --> starting fron the fifth position
- The track is one of ten intermediate to hold NASCAR races - This line seems redundant and needs to be removed .
- because he finished seventh - Who finished seventh ? and where did the other finish ?
Background[edit]
- ; the others are --> with the others being .
- opposite of the front --> opposite to the front
- The Manufactuers' Championship could have been sealed in Kansas in the event the highest-placed Chevrolet driver finished ahead of the highest-placed Toyota competitor --> The Manufactuers' Championship could have been sealed in Kansas if the highest-placed Chevrolet driver finished ahead of the highest-placed Toyota competitor
Practice and qualifying[edit]
- No issues
Race[edit]
- By lap 23, Earnhardt had a 1.9 second lead over Keselowski. - When did Keselowski pass Martin ?
- On the 37th lap, Johnson passed McMurray for third, as Stewart and Martin passed McMurray for fourth and fifth three laps later - Needs to be reworded
- Three laps later, Gordon passed Kahne to take fourth, and Marcos Ambrose lost the tenth position to Kahne . Needs to be fixed.
- Biffle made a fast restart to get ahead of Biffle and Johnson and move into second . Needs to be fixed
Images[edit]
- All the images seem to be okay .
Post-race[edit]
- No issues