Talk:2004 Les Saintes earthquake/GA2
GA Review[edit]
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Reviewer: LunaEatsTuna (talk · contribs) 16:00, 5 January 2023 (UTC)
- I will be able to get to this later tonight. 𓃦LunaEatsTuna (💬) 16:00, 5 January 2023 (UTC)
- Sorry for the delay! Please ping me once you have addressed these concerns of mine. Thanks, 𓃦LunaEatsTuna (💬) 15:15, 6 January 2023 (UTC)
- I will address the issues in a day or two. Been a hectic weekend for me. Thank you for understanding. Dora the Axe-plorer (explore) 16:27, 7 January 2023 (UTC)
- Hi @LunaEatsTuna, I've addressed the issues you've raised. Thank you. Dora the Axe-plorer (explore) 00:31, 8 January 2023 (UTC)
- Nice work! Thanks for wikilinking color-tagged structure. I am now happy to pass this article for GA status. 𓃦LunaEatsTuna (💬) 03:46, 8 January 2023 (UTC)
- Hi @LunaEatsTuna, I've addressed the issues you've raised. Thank you. Dora the Axe-plorer (explore) 00:31, 8 January 2023 (UTC)
- I will address the issues in a day or two. Been a hectic weekend for me. Thank you for understanding. Dora the Axe-plorer (explore) 16:27, 7 January 2023 (UTC)
Copyvio[edit]
Earwig says good to go. No concerns from me after reading the sources either.
Files[edit]
File:USGS Shakemap – 2004 Les Saintes earthquake.jpg: good, relevant, valid public domain rationale.
Prose[edit]
- "the eastern boundary is that of the Lesser Antilles subduction zone" – first mention in the body, wikilink Lesser Antilles subduction zone
- "A maximum intensity of VIII (Heavily damaging)" – maybe reiterate that this was recorded via the European macroseismic scale?
- "and a college were red-tagged" – red-tagged?
- "that occurred about 7 km (4.3 mi) to the northwest of the" – "to the" is unnecessary.
- "and wall and roof damage (including at some locations that were damaged during the mainshock)." – this is personal taste but I find it visually unappealing when a sentence ends with parentheses like this; there are two punctuation marks plus the citation. Suggest "and wall and roof damage—including at some locations that were damaged during the mainshock."
- "scientists were on scene within several days to investigate." – reads a bit like an upbeat news article; maybe "scientists were on scene several days later to investigate."?
- There are a few instances of "sea dropped" – should "sea" be "sea level" here?
- Add WP:ALT text to the image.
- Recommend adding Template:Use mdy dates and Template:Use X English under the short description.
See also[edit]
- I do not think Overseas France is necessary; wikilinking overseas department in the lead should be enough.
Refs[edit]
- Refs 3 and 7 look to be dead links.
Spot check on refs 5 and 8 show no concerns—they both support their cited content. I have access to ref 5 via the Wikipedia Library.
External links[edit]
Good.
Other[edit]
Navs and cats all good.
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