Draft:Breakdown (song) (Esher Rugby)

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Declined by HitroMilanese 18 days ago. Last edited by HitroMilanese 18 days ago. Reviewer: Inform author.

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Declined by HitroMilanese 19 days ago.

Comment: Please see WP:NSONG. Hitro talk 11:54, 3 May 2024 (UTC)

The Breakdown Song is a masterpiece written by the famous Andrew Bellis. Legend has it that this song was first performed before a final between Esher Rugby Under 15 Boys versus London Welsh Under 15 Boys. This song was a catalyst for emotions of the rugby players and urged them to take charge of the breakdown. This piece inspired the boys simply through the lyrics, consisting of: "Breakdown, breakdown, breakdown, breakdown". This simplicity incited a feeling in the boys that had never been felt by a living organism before. This song is not currently under any copyright infringement but could very possibly be put under one in the near future. This song is one of the most culturally significant pieces of history in the period of Mankind's existence.

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