Wikipedia:WikiProject Military history/Assessment/Landing on Emirau
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- Promoted –Abraham, B.S. (talk) 02:08, 23 April 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Landing on Emirau[edit]
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One of World War II's lesser known battles. Rather more one-sided than most, as there was no fighting. Hawkeye7 (talk) 21:46, 17 April 2009 (UTC)[reply]
- Support
- Just a small one if the island was not occupied by the Japanese and there was no fighting how do we get a Japanese commander section in the info box
- Also Australia and New Zealand are listed on the Allied side - unless I missed it the only participation I can find is RNZAF squadrons used to Garrison the island after the landings in December and the Australian 8th Infantry Btn arrived in September
--Jim Sweeney (talk) 11:49, 18 April 2009 (UTC)[reply]
- Support Great article. Some suggestions you may wish to consider are:
- Gordon Rottman's U.S. Marine Corps World War II order of battle states that only a reinforced amphibian tractor company was involved, along with a single marine pioneer company
- When was the 3rd Battalion landed? (eg, was it held in reserve until after the initial landing was completed?)
- The sentence 'Some shots were fired the natives informed the marines that the Japanese had left the island two months before' is a bit unclear (who were the shots fired at? - the natives?)
- Given that the island was undefended, why was a full regiment assigned to take it? Was this routine caution (and making use of available troops) or were their fears of a repeat of the Admiralty Islands campaign?
- Was this the 4th Marine Regiment's first operation after being formed from the raider battalions in February?
- I don't think that 'See also' sections should only include a link to the relevant portal - if the portal is the only link then it should be placed with the notes or references section
Nick-D (talk) 23:16, 18 April 2009 (UTC)[reply]
- Comments - (this version)
- One external link needs to be checked.
- Sources look good.
- Publishers, authors for the two web refs?
- Access date for #24?
- What makes http://www.jje.info/lostlives/exhib/potp/kaviengwharf.html reliable?
- You have OCLC's! :-) —Ed 17 (Talk / Contribs) 20:14, 21 April 2009 (UTC)[reply]
- Support. No major issues, but it would be nice if you mentioned what happened to the base after the end of the war. Was it just abandoned and allowed to fall into disrepair? – Joe N 00:04, 23 April 2009 (UTC)[reply]
- Support YellowMonkey (cricket calendar poll!) 01:47, 23 April 2009 (UTC)[reply]
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