Talk:Ames Project/GA1
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Reviewer: Djmaschek (talk · contribs) 03:16, 11 June 2016 (UTC)
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Here are my review comments. They are mostly typos, but I'll let you fix them. Djmaschek (talk) 04:11, 11 June 2016 (UTC)
- Introduction: Consider adding an infobox, though I'm not sure which one would be appropriate. Or, argue persuasively why the article does not need one. (I see that the Metallurgical Laboratory article does not have an infobox.)
- Organization, paragraph 1, last sentence: associate directory > director.
- Ames Process, paragraph 2, first sentence: oxide could > oxide that could.
- Production, paragraph 1: Metallurgical; Lab > Metallurgical Lab.
- Production, paragraph 4, sentence 2: But it also harder > But it was also harder.
- Production, paragraph 4: of1,500 > of 1,500.
- Chemistry: paragraph 1, sentence 2: There is no verb. Please fix.