Wikipedia talk:Featured article candidates/Pokémon Channel/archive1

Resolved review from czar

• copyedited, in lieu of lots of small suggestions
• {{Video game release}} formatting is looking wonky with its line spacing. I don't know what's going on there, but a different format might help
  • Did it manually. Tezero (talk) 18:51, 30 March 2014 (UTC)
• I don't know whether the show titles should be italicized. They might be better in quotes or plain title case since they're not real shows
  • I'd prefer to keep the italics, as the article uses a decent number of proper nouns and quotes as it is. Tezero (talk) 19:21, 30 March 2014 (UTC)

Fine by me ♔

• What's going on with the commented out text in Gameplay?
  • Those were other programs that I didn't think were worth mentioning. Removed. Tezero (talk) 18:44, 30 March 2014 (UTC)
• Consider using list-defined refs in the future—would make me more inclined to give a thorough copyedit
  • Huh. I wasn't aware of those. Probably inconsequential now, though, as the article's sources won't be changing much. Tezero (talk) 18:51, 30 March 2014 (UTC)
• "When it arrives the next morning": when what arrived? the new or the old?
  • New. Fixed. Tezero (talk) 18:44, 30 March 2014 (UTC)
• "for which the device is intended": the device or the projector?
  • The device is the projector, per ""Star Projector", a device for viewing images flashed across the sky". Tezero (talk) 18:44, 30 March 2014 (UTC)

So let's call it "Projector" ♔

• Did the devs know it was bad?
  • I don't know it's bad. Wikipedia doesn't know it's bad. I have no idea if the devs didn't like it personally, although I suspect otherwise as they did finish it. Tezero (talk) 18:44, 30 March 2014 (UTC)
• If the release dates are adequately sourced here, the footnotes should be removed from the infobox
  • Done. Tezero (talk) 18:44, 30 March 2014 (UTC)
• April date should include the year if it isn't the same as the others—not obvious that it's the following year unless it is explicitly indicated (and sourced) as the last release
  • Agreed. I sure didn't remove the year... Tezero (talk) 18:44, 30 March 2014 (UTC)
• "Overall, the title": over where? the world?
  • I don't know who added that. Just Japan. Tezero (talk) 18:44, 30 March 2014 (UTC)
• "limited praise to": qualify? better described with the author's words than in potential OR
  • Done. Tezero (talk) 19:21, 30 March 2014 (UTC)

czar ♔ 20:35, 30 March 2014 (UTC)