Wikipedia:WikiProject Military history/Peer review/PSS Silent Pistol

PSS Silent Pistol[edit]

This is an new article about a relitively unknown Soviet/Russian pistol, and is also my first Wikipedia article. I would like to run it by more experienced members, with hopes of improving it. JVkamp 21:21, 19 December 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Kirill Lokshin[edit]

Well, as you said, this is a new article; the main thing it needs right now is simply more material. There's a lot of historical context missing that seems like it would be publically available: when and how did the weapon fall into Western hands? Are there records of it being used? What examples have been located, and where? What information is available about its development and manufacture? And so forth. At the moment, the article touches only on the technical aspects; it should, if possible, go beyond this.

Aside from that, some general issues:

Citations should be added as appropriate.
Are there any images of the weapon or the ammunition? Or perhaps diagrams that could be drawn based on the description?
A lead section is needed.

Kirill Lokshin 01:37, 20 December 2006 (UTC)[reply]