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List of Knight's Cross with Oak Leaves recipients: 1940[edit]

I am looking for feedback on the article. The article/list is one of many comprising the recipients of different grades of the Knight's Cross of the Iron Cross. I am especially interested in understanding whether this article/list as part of a larger collection of articles/lists qualifies for A-class assessment. Thanks MisterBee1966 (talk) 11:21, 7 January 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Abraham, B.S.[edit]

Although this list is good, it really isn't enough for A-Class, let alone FLC. I have the following suggestions:

  • There is quite a bit of whitespace in the article at the top of the page before the lead.
  • The information in general on the award and recipients requires expansion and further detail.
  • It might be an idea to add alt text to the images.
  • In an overall concept, this list is too short and does not contain enough entrants. As there isn't a lot in the of entrants in the List of Knight's Cross with Oak Leaves recipients: 1941 either—particularly in comparison to the next few lists—I would recommend that the two lists be combined to form List of Knight's Cross with Oak Leaves recipients: 1940–1941. This would create a decent size list and, with additional prose content, hopefully a good A-Class or FLC contender.

Cheers, Abraham, B.S. (talk) 04:17, 8 January 2010 (UTC)[reply]