Wikipedia:WikiProject Highways/Peer review/Saskatchewan Highway 58

Saskatchewan Highway 58[edit]

Working on a few Saskatchewan highway articles to help raise quality levels to perhaps good or feature and would like to know if the contributions are on the right path.SriMesh | talk 18:10, 30 December 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Hi, they are on the right path. Here are some issues I found.

Done~~Spelling error :Northv -> North~~

Introductory paragraph needs some work, in one spot it talks about a lake, but wikilinks to an article about a plateau. An almost identical sentence at the bottom of the article wikilinks to a different article about a lake.

Done~~Rename header: Major attractions should be just Attractions~~
DoneWatch the Peacock terms. For example :Thomson Lake local regional park became the very first regional park in the province of Saskatchewan. In this case the italics and the word "very" should be stricken, unless this is a quote, there are a few other similar examples.

Davemeistermoab (talk) 05:47, 9 January 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Fixed the above comments, as well as the wikilink in the lead. Will work on the lead some more yet though. Thank you very much for your comments.SriMesh | talk 05:27, 11 January 2008 (UTC)[reply]