Wikipedia:WikiProject Biography/Peer review/Terry Dehere

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Terry Dehere[edit]

I have just recently expanded this article. It is listed as a stub, but I have never worked on a stub before and am seeking feedback. I don't even know if it is ready to have the stub tags removed at this point. I would like to get this bio up to GA status, but need to find some more references and information on the subject. Jim Miller 13:43, 9 April 2007 (UTC)[reply]

CloudNine[edit]

A good start. A few comments:

  • Try to use the {{cite web}} format in your references.
  • Mention of early life in lead needs its own section. Who were his parents etc.? Check any featured biography, such as Michael Jordan, for more on this.
  • It would be nice if a free photo could be found; I'm sure politicians are keen to release photos. Try sending an e-mail; see Wikipedia:Example requests for permission.
  • Lead will eventually need expanding per WP:LEAD.
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