Wikipedia:Peer review/Winkler, Manitoba/archive1
Winkler, Manitoba[edit]
I've been editing this article over the past few days. I'd like your opinion on how to improve it, since I feel it has the potential to be a featured article in the future. Manitoban 19:57, 13 August 2005 (UTC)
- Good work so far. The article needs three relatively easy, but important, changes before it could be considered FA worthy. It needs a somewhat longer lead, needs a references section, and also some pictures. The content is quite good, but I would like to see somewhat longer history and culture sections, if possible. There are also too many one or two sentence paragraphs. - SimonP 03:10, August 14, 2005 (UTC)
- I must say this has a good change of gaining FA status, provided it is expanded. You'd have to increase the length of single paragraph section first. Also some pix are required. Have you taken a look at other city featured articles? =Nichalp «Talk»= 09:01, August 15, 2005 (UTC)
- I've had a look at other city featured articles that are most comparable in population size (that I know of) to Winkler. I'll work on improving the lead and expanding the smaller paragraphs, although I don't have a digital camera so I won't be able to get pictures myself. Thanks for your advice and insight. Manitoban 18:25, 17 August 2005 (UTC)
hey manitoban let me know who you are, i live in winkler and may be able to assist with this